Black Poetry : Twin Peeks

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Look deep into my eyes when you talk,
    you're sure to be impressed
    for the mirrors of my soul lie there my dear,
    and not, from that which protrudes from my chest.
    Yes I'm talkin bout those "mammarys"
    no wisdom lies within your quest
    to compare the two and secretly decide
    which one you like the best.
    If by chance my eyes don't interest you,
    perhaps your attention can rest
    on my hands, since it has been said I talk with
    them, or on my mouth as each word is expressed.
    Reminds me of a similar experience that a
    friend of mine once confessed...
    She told me this story of a man, and what
    occurred when she spoke to him.
    Never once did he actually say good morning
    to her, he said good morning to "them".
    Now, supposin since she was in that way blessed
    her bust line had put a hex on him, we guessed.
    Why are they so interesting? They have yet to educate
    the masses, or help with even the most menial task.
    They don't know the answer to any of life's mysteries
    no matter how many times you ask
    I realize there is an urge to look at them
    and if one just casually glances, I don't care
    but if I'm buttoned up to the neck, and they're
    not hanging out, for goodness sakes, don't stare...

    By the way, what color are my eyes again?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well expressed with much meanings into a twin peek !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Rich for seeing the meanings within the message, appreciated.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome ...... through eyez that speaks we learn and recieve nothing
    from the chest no more then baby feed to caress images of twins they
    say the peek of how they lay but the eyez tell a story and let you know
    if for one moment deep........so i vent to see upon da eyes, yes ur right
    suprised......... where are them eyez to say !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Exactly, Rich...

    My eyez exist
    here and teach
    what some
    merely preach
    exuding winter, spring,
    summer and fall
    But the bosom that some must focus
    upon are merely twin peeks, that's all...

    Thankz a million brotha....
     
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    BrownEyed Girly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I FEEL ya!!!! LOL Much to love you for this. I think most of ladies have this problem!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for the love on this BrownEyed Girly, yes it's a problem that many I'm sure share.
     
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    I'm a just be real with you. I'm still gonna stare no matter what because there's nothing like looking into her eyes and catching glare of the sun setting between the twin peaks. If you miss that you miss the world's eighth wonder. Don't get me wrong though because I still like your message point.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you still like my message point, because it still remains. My eyes will tell a story that the twin peeks(I used that spelling on purpose) can never tell. Thank you for responding, Tha Emissary.
     
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    BEEEE-a-u-tiful! :flowers:
     
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