Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, Feb 20, 2002.
The place in between is the area where my heart resides
meet me there
here is the key
let yourself in
make yourself comfortable
and prepare to reign
by my side
of the House of Light
where we overlook the Sea called Love
as the sun and the Knight come together
dusk if formed
as we embrace in our poetical intercourse
that we may release in an
with lyrical ovaries
a twilight of Xtasy possibilities.
Dem twilight rendezvous be sumthin else!
Watch out dere now! Oh, and by the way,
the poem is tight to the 2nd power!
ps. thanks for teaching me how to do the color and stuff.
this is fun!
ok, so it didnt work
ill try again next time!
2Tyte! Scribe On Poetress!
Poetically Turn'd Out!
a tyte Bish and GA collaboration
i'm feelin' the tyte flow
i'm diggin it (smh)
a lotta heat coming from GA today!
what's tha deal lady? got the scribin vibes
in ya fore- and hindsight.
lovin the intensity of the words, as usual.
didn't get a chance to blaze the boards today.
but i'm comin.
ya boi (i guess)
You tryna get me back?????
This is an exceptional piece of YOU!!!
You gone make me call you out cho dayum name up in hea... wait, I already do that.
Well what i'm sayin is if you keep writing like this you gone force us to break up...lol Cause my mental caint afford this ****!
I'm spent on this peice right hea ma... fa real! The WHOLE thing ma!
Well well sistah......this says it all, and then some! Well written work of art!
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