Black Poetry : ...twilight rendezvous.

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...twilight rendezvous.
     
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    The place in between is the area where my heart resides
    meet me there
    here is the key
    let yourself in
    make yourself comfortable
    and prepare to reign
    by my side
    as queen
    co-ruler
    of the House of Light
    where we overlook the Sea called Love
    as the sun and the Knight come together
    dusk if formed
    as we embrace in our poetical intercourse
    that we may release in an
    literary ejaculation
    of
    verbal semen
    mixed
    with lyrical ovaries
    producing
    a twilight of Xtasy possibilities.
     
  3. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SunShyne...

    Dem twilight rendezvous be sumthin else!
    Watch out dere now! Oh, and by the way,
    the poem is tight to the 2nd power!

    ps. thanks for teaching me how to do the color and stuff.
    this is fun!
     
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    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok, so it didnt work
    ill try again next time!
     
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    Sr,

    2Tyte! Scribe On Poetress!

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    Jr :heart:
     
  6. poeticdelight

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    oh oh

    a tyte Bish and GA collaboration

    i'm feelin' the tyte flow

    i'm diggin it (smh)

    pd
     
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    a lotta heat coming from GA today!
    what's tha deal lady? got the scribin vibes
    in ya fore- and hindsight.
    lovin the intensity of the words, as usual.
    didn't get a chance to blaze the boards today.
    but i'm comin.

    ya boi (i guess)
     
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    Awwww ****!!!!

    BlakGurl,

    You tryna get me back????? :laugh:

    This is an exceptional piece of YOU!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA!

    You gone make me call you out cho dayum name up in hea... wait, I already do that.

    Well what i'm sayin is if you keep writing like this you gone force us to break up...lol Cause my mental caint afford this ****!

    I'm spent on this peice right hea ma... fa real! The WHOLE thing ma!

    Madd Love
    Reas
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well well sistah......this says it all, and then some! :) Well written work of art!

    N2 :)
     
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