Black Poetry : Tweek Tweek Little Star

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  1. whisper

    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tweek Tweek Little Star


    twinkle twinkle
    white powder dust
    how i wonder
    why you are a "MUST"

    like the stars
    in the sky
    you want to be
    but you"ll tweek and die

    twinkle twinkle
    white powder dust
    how i wonder
    why you are a" MUST"
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    down in the deep !
    dis power will put to sleep
    make u tweek & winkle
    for the high trying to
    reach da sky
    not a much
    but many put up a fuss
    to be unjust
    so twinkle twinkle
    who ever u are take
    a ride out very far

    from the hood of struggling
    we need to clean it up
    and dust down the street
    this was tyte reality call
     
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    dis was a nice
     
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    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey $Rich$ that was tight i like that .
    thanks you cindy and mzblkangel .
    you guys really keep me vibing
    something i have'nt done in a long time

    peace and love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up whisper ya flow is on hit
    more more more !!!!!
     
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    what a nice little flow...and so truthful. i loved it.
     
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    whisper why dont u whisper a lil more :)
     
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    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks, triniti424.
    have you read rocks and woes also mother goose in the hood part-2.and life in a nursey rhyme? i just wanted to do a few nursery rhyme with a taste of reality
    ryhmes.
     
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    i like how you
    flip these rhymes
    wonderful
    how it mix with the times
    Peace
     
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    whisper Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you Bluewater. i though it would be fun with a sense of being serious
     
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