Black Poetry : TVPD

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Dec 20, 2005.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TVPD busts my balls eternally
    And clearly sees me
    For whatnot Black reality

    Blacks on TV
    Victimize society
    While EVERYBODY
    Learns to be afraid of me

    TVPD cops and robs identity
    Can't people see...
    I'm one man ~
    Just Black like me

    Dizzy Gillespie,
    Miles, Coltrane, I ought to be
    Some folks feel me
    Others trust their TV 's


    Darryl Abdu Omari :killpc:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2005
     
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    Man, this is a real electrical piece. I have a poem similar to this concept, Young Man, Young Man. I enjoyed every word, line, and stanza man. Great work.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    felt the flow in this one flow on poet.:spinstar:
     
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    awesome piece wit a charge
     
  5. Omowale Jabali

    Omowale Jabali The Cosmic Journeyman PREMIUM MEMBER

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    I feel ya poet!
     
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