Black Poetry : Turned Out ...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Oct 9, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~you twist my mental in every position imaginable~

    threw in a few
    more contortions
    added some
    beautiful new
    distortions

    on the crazy
    merry-go-round-you
    that I revolve

    I just sit ~
    wave "bye-bye"
    as Ms. Will & Ms. Power
    dissolve

    only thing
    I want to do
    is touch myself~
    alldayeveryday
    ineveryway~
    and you

    with that.....
    look
    you make
    my physical
    unwind
    fire me up
    & smoke it
    till I'm stone
    blind

    my emotional
    been a long time
    in your keep,
    thinking
    'bout how
    you be doing
    makes me
    weep

    my soul
    been
    deep-dipped
    in your spirit,
    I'd die DEAD
    if I couldn't
    get near it

    you got this,
    baby
    from gone
    & back & gone
    again

    long as I
    live, I ain't
    be trynna
    understan.....



    Alyce (c) 2001

    From, "B-52"
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms. A

    Hey there sustah A ~

    Lovin' the tapestry here! I also knew Ms. Will & Ms. Power too gurl!

    You're pieces always rescue my emotions!

    Keep bringin' them home! One :heart:

    N2
     
  3. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ms. A

    now you know I loveddddd this here all of it but this be ma favorite:

    "look
    you make
    my physical
    unwind
    fire me up
    & smoke it
    till I'm stone
    blind"


    I got dem doption' papers, now are you gone sign em?????? Please



    One
     
  4. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as always
    strong
    and
    real
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Suthern Guhl

    I dig this from the very beginning

    "You twist my mental in every position imaginable"

    to the way you left me hangin on for the last word...

    Simply Brill
    Reas
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce....


    ...ummm... i'm just g'on ask you straight out...

    you been readin' my journal or somethin'??! :lol:
    either that or you been reading my mind!! this
    is one of those peaces... that makes you wanna
    holla... 'cause it hits home so **** hard!!

    gggggurl!! you betta quit it!

    AlwaysLove.
    SunShyne~
     
  7. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A

    this brings to mind the phrase.."gettin' under your skin"
    and then I think he found his way around your whole body...flowing over your senses like cool water on a hot day..

    K
     
  8. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Alyce gurl u know how to take yo

    reader inside and on the journey of bliss.....do yo thang!
    sistah Queen.....:heart: :kiss:
     
  9. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whew!

    I'm sitting back in complete amazement. You have any more of this bomb sheeit, sis?

    whoa!

    BRB
     
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