Black Poetry : Turn me out

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Antar, Jan 20, 2004.

  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm an oven door
    you can push my buttons
    pull my handle
    with care
    let me work past
    suggestive intentions

    cast the words inside
    i eat them
    comer
    the list is vast

    i feel cluttered like
    like no open spaces
    places with cut-out
    pictures covered

    i hum captured prayers
    the rarity of deliverance
    circumstances to be
    bruised by...
    the pieces of me
    influenced by heaven's
    descent
    with what world do you
    say that i belong

    i envision you closer
    even close to me

    not the mimicry of
    warcries of hiphop weaponry
    and sirened love cries
    which beckon me
    to a maze of mystery

    where i lay in silence
    guidance is true
    let me
    it's tricky to hold on loosely
    to something so sticky
    introduce me
    combinations
    remain unadultered
    surpass previous ideals

    i wave heat rays
    at planes
    on plains away
    from the concentrations
    that penetrate my days
    meshing
    softer hues
    diluting the waves of
    the skies gray
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    i enjoyed this read.....
    flow on...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice scribe
    ya pen on fire here
    keep flowing poet
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now....a verse like this...
    I can get into...
    this was..."phenomenal"
    ****Applause & Snaps**** :bowdown:
     
  5. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks folk...
     
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