Black Poetry : Trying To Regulate The Flow

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Jul 14, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    My face on a hundred dollar bill.
    Serial number B79999075B
    I photo copied and placed it there.
    It's hanging in my office for
    comedy you see.

    That 100 dollar bill plain paper back.
    Looking at me.
    It wasn't my first hopefully not my last.
    I spent that dollar. It sure went fast.
    Maybe thats why I copied it.
    It comes and it goes.
    From my left pocket to my right to your hand out the door.
    I have my copy.
    I know it was real.
    I can't spend it, it's a copy.
    Can't pay bills.

    Counterfeit. :confused:

    Money that dollar with my face.
    Hanging over my desk just a memory of sorts.
    Remember the day it was flowing that way.
    Searching for a way to slow the flow,
    from left to right to your hand.
    Out the door. :D
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    uniquely written...and i love it...tyte...
     
  3. HODEE

    HODEE going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Thanks Lovely.. I do have that 100 bill on my stick board at work.
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was something different from you....I like
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    VERY DIFFERENT STYLE U POSE AND GREAT FLOW
     
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