Black Poetry : Trying to put a crack in my writer's block

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by mysslez, Jul 24, 2004.

  1. mysslez

    mysslez Member MEMBER

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    for the unvirgin

    sacred exploration lingers amidst orgasmic fornication of the mind
    while body and soul are penetrated equally with empty moans and piercing pitches
    of screams from the hell of one-sided ejaculation due to misinformation and love –
    lust—love hangs in the balance waiting to tip the scales of emotional justice
    because the anticlimax is coming to the realization that
    first should have been last choice yet number one remains the sole and soul
    no one hurt so bad or so good and it’s funny how hurt became good
    and love became bad as it fades and diffuses into the noxious realm of self and selfishness leaving selflessness behind to fend for itself in an open cavity of matter
    that no longer matters leaving self preservation by masturbation as the only recourse
    until the atom of purity goes Dutch and germinates mind, body, and soul
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!
    heavy flow


    do hope you become a premium member
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    as u support the comunity get your membership
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    http://www.destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=26882
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree with Rich......this didn't just put a crack on your writers block..it demolished it!!!!

    tight write poet...flow on....
     
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    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MYSSLEZ: I would offer that not only did you put a "crack in your writers bloc" with this piece, but you blasted a hole in that blickee :uzi:
    this, I must honestly say, is one of the most entertaining pieces I've read on this site...you got real skillz

    please render some more :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa! This is deep as the ocean and intricately laid. Please, flow on, as much as you want to.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so rich and thick with descriptive verse, this scribe just shouts, POETRY!!!!!!!
     
  7. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow

    U don't skirt around the problem n u tell whatchu think!Fairly good n really deep
     
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