Black Poetry : Trying to decide.. what is real

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am trying to divide what is real
    Working out the emotions of my heart
    Complicated situation
    Moved between us
    Broken connections

    I seem to be so confused
    Can you see
    Look again
    I am the moment you seek

    If you want what we once had
    All you need to do is speak

    Say you want me
    Say you need me
    Because I feel the same about you

    If this continues
    This broken dream
    I am lost in this world without you
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That wanting, that needing what you had in the past, could it still exist, yearning for that connection to be the same. Feeling this one brother poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime what was , could it be still awaiting feeling da same soon time will tell.
    feeling ya....awesome write
     
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