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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, May 1, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Got my pen and my
    Paper book
    Releasing the pain
    And sharp edges
    Of what’s inside
    Flowing in my realm
    As demons flow
    Wishing and wondering
    Trying to be…
    Just leave me alone….
    Going through loops
    Just trying to deal
    The hurt burns
    And the pain kills
    When will it dull?
    Or just faded
    Away
    Away…..
    Trying to get back up
    But seems I always fall
    Stab in the back crush
    In a minute
    Of the blink of the eye….
    My inside
    Just die
    Die…..
    Empty can’t feel
    Losing it slowly
    Feeling like I am
    Touch mentally
    Just insane
    This pain…
    Cant explain
    Dizzy hazy
    Working
    Working
    Trying not to
    Lose myself
    In this world..
    Not feeling whole
    Falling
    Falling
    Confuse
    Misuse
    Betrayed
    Hurt
    Black…..
    Out
    Wishing and wondering
    If things will change
    How much you love thyself
    Don’t make the happiness come
    The day is still blue
    As the night is gray….
    Falling
    Falling
    Falling…..
    Depression sat in
    and the demons roam
    As the soul moans for release
    And the spirit out in a corner
    Cant breath
    Cant sleep….
    Sick……
    Mental collapse…
    Got my pen and my
    Paper book
    Trying to release
    Trying to break free….
    One day I will…
    But for today
    I just write
    Write
    Write
    And one day
    Maybe I can break free…….
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Writing does help to free the mind, and ease the pain, keep flowing.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely u will be free
    write the pain u feel
    express ya heart and hunger
    what seen to hold up will release
    i too know this all so well been there
     
  4. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this piece while reading all I could think of was shackles how they trap us:wink:
    flow on:wave:
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    releasin.....indeed helps
    thanks to all you for loving support you show...
    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. Tatiana

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    energy flows through this piece,,,Good write
     
  7. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know what ya mean, sis. This is a great release. I am feelin you.
     
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