Black Poetry : Trying something new

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cuvriefloesta, Dec 25, 2003.

  1. cuvriefloesta

    cuvriefloesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :uhoh: Ok..imma try this love poem thang...cuz yall make it look good!!!

    I see you
    I mean who doesn't see you?
    It's not everyday you see a something other than a lady wearing pink

    You must be really confident
    or really feminine
    either way I'm feelin you

    I see you
    Do you see me
    of course you do
    I'm not invisable

    You look good
    real good
    too good
    Please excuse me while I lick my lips

    Dam* they taste better than ever
    I guess it's because I'm lookin at chocolate
    and thinking bout honey

    dang
    pink never looked so good
    you make me want...
    Naw I aint old enough for that
    but excuse me while I lick my lips

    I don't know why
    but my
    tongue is dry
    I guess that's to be expecting since you had it watering all that time

    but can you excuse me while I lick my lips
    Mann a triple scoop strawberry icecream cone covered in chocolate never looked so good. :x:
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yummy indeed can i have some ....lol
    love dis here flow
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :) very nice..i am liking this flow
    flow more :)
    Peace
    Blue
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow
    i enjoyed.....really nice...:angel1:
     
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