Black Poetry : TRYING my BEST

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Sep 22, 2003.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My pen is alive.

    Like the poetry I scribe.

    Ever waiting to pour out of my mind,
    like a fine well aged wine.

    Have a glass.

    Feel the drunken glow of you know me.

    Shooting star.

    Native of this land.

    Coming thru with poetic stance.

    Stance after stance.

    Music yet to be told.

    Writing stanza for time to hold.

    Writing to heal the soul.

    Tell of the love I hold.

    Of the things I see.

    Those times.

    That envelope me.

    Woe they be deep.

    I step softly everyday.

    Not knowing the deep spots anymore.

    I do know.

    Some can wrap me up and eat all my time.

    So I share.

    Pointed stars.

    Looking at you as my life unfold.

    I struggle night and day.

    To win over you.

    Flower like petals smelling of rose and germanium.

    Sprinkled in my life.

    Numbers carry a symbol.

    I like the number eight.

    It has a never ending loop.

    Continuous like life in this world of mine.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice very nice....
    :toast: CONGRATULATION :toast:
    again...
     
  3. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot: :hot:

    My brutha this piece was hot like always........ you did it again......
     
  4. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Angel, and Da1.. Going to have me some coffee now. Could I offer you some.
     
  5. gempis

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    HODEE, you r such a tender soul. Love this part:

    Not knowing the deep spots anymore


    Yeah


    I also like the number 8. It's a power number.

    Keep on scribing, my friend.
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya pen speaks
    this was on point like food to the poetic soul
    keep it coming
     
  7. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    :yo: this was realll slick!:kiss:
     
  8. true love

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    very nice...just a peaceful piece of poetry...it painted a lovely picture in my head...what a beautiful job.
     
  9. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I agree with TRUE I loved the ride off this poetic flow :)
     
  10. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Fam..

    Gempis - I didn't know it was a power number. I like it even more now. Well I like seven too.

    $$RICH$$ - Yea I was feeling all poet like this morning. Tried to change my style some, plu's it was early. I needed coffee.

    MORE - I appreciate your support. I look for your post. I really like your style.

    True Love - I was trying for how a poet may feel. I hope I captured some of that in this piece. Your support is great. Love it.

    Triniti - I appreciate you too. You never fail to show the love.
     
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