Black Poetry : Tryin 2 break me !

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Tryin to mold me to her kind
    when she full of cheatin and lying
    wanna take all my rights
    for her personal cheap delights
    but i'm a fighter a soulful winner
    at da court against my sinner

    Telling da sons of thy will
    to forget and kill ones thrill
    yet inside da pain just spill
    because his fate now been seal
    how do one swallow such pill
    no longer can i have peace be still
    when she now my bitter meal

    Tryin to break me down
    seekin destruction upon my sound
    i'm now to wear such frown
    but i'm headed into a victory bound
    I'll see u in da court of law
    didn't u know of my clawing paw
    i will dig and dig to da end of time
    to show da world how u so unkind

    U can't break what's not broken
    beware for what might be smokin
    time is right now i'm not joking
    playin da game dats not to be played
    watch out for da monster u made
    because da truth surely will pave
    and might send ya tail to ya grave

    U can't break me !!!!:smokin:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some situations require our own personal suit of armor, and it appears that you have that. This strife won't last for always. Keep forging ahead.
     
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    Way to tell them/ Often things come to us to take us out but I am glad to see that you can and will fight back. be strong my brother
     
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    We all know in this life, you get what you give,
    ya got to do right by others as long as you live.
    so ...
    instead, ...send that monster she made (in you)...to the grave
    cause surely she'll travel down that same road she paved
    b
    u
    t

    there may be something about her that we don't understand
    I
    s

    That, she may have been put where she's at ...
    by the hands of a MAN!!​
     
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    Whoaaaaaa...
    Brotha Rich in a poetic fury? Wow I feel sorry for whomever but the point was well illustrated brotha :read:
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    all i can say it ut oh

    i know what it is

    :11300::em19::driveby:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz family but it's on and i'm well suited for the task.
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was deep Richie....I hope all is well.
     
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    long story short note .....winner of thy sinner ! yes it's all good
     
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    Sir Richness...

    I must say... this is a side of you I've never seen,
    but sometimes we need to release in poetry so
    we don't release else where.

    We can't be broken if we don't allow ourselves to be.

    Feelin' your vibe here.


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
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