Black Poetry : Try

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Nov 16, 2002.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Try even though you feel like you can't go
    Try even though you feel as if your body can't take no more
    Try even though the pain sings louder than a babys cry
    It will grow softer as you perservere
    It will die as you
    Begin to move
    Into you
    As you progress into a new view
    As you release the real you
    Feel you
    See you
    Me, you
    Into you
    Be you
    Do you
    Free you
    Be you
    Believe in you
     
  2. LibertyLady

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    i,ll try..............................
    thank you poet for this incuraging poem
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    trying hard
    trying right
    i'm trying ............Thankz
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey you're WELCOME!!!! glad you were feeling this libertylaida, you are an awesome person i liked your poem about these two little boys, i wish it could be all fine and dandy when it comes to religion but the reality is that it's not even though we would like it two be and it can tear two people apart trying to love one another in a relationship especially..... well, i'm glad that i met you libertylaida because i see i'm not the only one in that struggle, Rich, thanx for always blessing me with kind words I really appreciate it
     
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    If you try inertia is impossible