Black Poetry : Try and Do It

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rhymebad, Sep 8, 2008.

  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Try and Do It

    Crews snooze on my skills got huge shoes to fill it’s time
    To amputate that **** hate from the game that exist online
    Gets all sort of praise in words or short phrase rhymes strong
    And mandatory plus bring a strong story sometimes I’m alone
    On the throne wearing a crown and tearing down tones on microphones
    Served as a crew member through December now ready to explode
    On a road of comeback it’s a dumb act not to life starting to corrode
    Like rusty steel getting dusty deals with CEO’S got me mad perhaps
    The theme of rap is some extreme crap get your spleen snapped
    My flow loose and profuse and throw juice in microphones yap
    About illness, the results is great when I cultivate hip hop and
    Flip crops like farmers then hurdle wise and fertilize my plans
    To give them roots so nin-compoops get choked and stopped
    They be corrupt and whack it’s time to cut back on that slop
    Crush routes let them rush about wildly trying to find a new road
    Got a true load of lyrics have to use a dump truck my blue code
    Is funk corrupt owed to the rap game but now somehow I’m trapped
    Must stop the growth of whackness I post after I practice rap
    Money I count rude which equal amounts of food can’t slap
    The hand that feed you I proceed to work for a paycheck
    It stay bent because I pay rent living expense keep me wrecked
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All types of flavors in reasons and rhymes, some appreciated, others not. Appreciate others skills, and know your own worth as well.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya drop it on da table here and sure it's like a rolling ball bouncing about