Black Poetry : Try Again...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DymePlaya2g, Jan 16, 2003.

  1. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you ever have those days where you just don't feel right? well i'm having one of those days. i can feel my over emotional tendencies wanting to flare up and complicate my life. i have a tightening in my chest and my head feels so cluttered and chaotic...i'm not thinking clearly and 1/4 of me wants to cry...but just to see if would make any difference...not because i'm hurt. I'm far above and beyond pain but, uneasiness eases me into some messed up, ****ed up, corner where I'm looking for you, and reaching...for your hand, or your heart to calm and soothe me...and while they're unfamiliar to me now...they're still recognizeable in some other sense...it's ******** that i feel this way...i want to just start this day over tomorrow.

    that totally came outta no where so excuse me if it doesn't make the most sense. so much **** is running rampant in my mind and i wanna just go to sleep and wake up only when i'm next to you.
     
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    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Emotions are a mofo aint they?
     
  3. Kimdricka

    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i couldn't agree more. just like a roller costa! i feel ya dymeplaya.
     
  4. DymePlaya2g

    DymePlaya2g Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *WHEW* YES THEY MOST CERTAINLY ARE or IZ? does it really MATTER about the GRAMMAR? and I don't give a S*it if my words don't rhyme because only certain words rhyme with certain words and I can't be certain that those words capture me in real time...and because DAMNIT...i say what i feel when i feel it.

    Love&Respect,
    DP2G
     
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    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you and been there
    "And this to shall pass".....
     
  6. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeap, yeap...can relate, but take your stance, keep the faith, hold on and ride the wave....soon the emotions will settle
    Great poem!
     
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