Black Poetry : Try affection don’t go direction of rapture you’ll face

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Try affection don’t go direction of rapture you’ll face
    Detection and capture like General Custer a true disgrace
    Criminal buster fell at little big Horn with a wig scorned
    In defeat, rock best with the process of rap by others adorned
    Be able with TV cable to have all Cox, ill like Smallpox
    When I change channels see strange animal on my installed box
    Wear dew rag pathetic lyrics magnetic like attract metals as
    Facts settles on whack pedals like kids on Schiwins bikes just jazz
    Rigorous in scum is like having exiguous income it don’t
    Pay well but I carry devastation with literary reputation and stomp
    Hard, catch ****ty strife in city life, wearing leather exhilarates me
    But rainy weather rehabilitate the sea, vocab elevates my spree
    Blast well and cast spells like fairy tales leave airy trails
    Bewitched hard to see which way is better duck hairy jails
    Rhymes ill like a unique fever epidemic, use a meat cleaver
    Up in it
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DANG THIS ONE WASN'T WOTH PEEPING i GUESS
     
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    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I came, I saw, I liked. You have a raw emotional energy that moves me. Good job.
     
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    Zen Master_1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great flow

    Be nice to see the trueness on video with an interesting beat, yeah I will be checking you out for sure.

    Zen Master
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    toylin and Zen Master_1 thanks for the props on this one for real yo
     
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