Black Poetry : Truth

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by one_love, Apr 6, 2001.

  1. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Who can trust
    When the truth
    People, friends, bust?
    Why the lies
    When I was
    There for you?
    What is friendship
    When you just
    Lie to me?
    How could I
    Be so foolish
    To trust you?
    No time,
    No friendship
    No love.
    But I? Why?
    One_Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SOMETYME WE CHOOSE THE OUTTER SIDE TO BE FRIENDS
    WIT YET INSIDE LAY RED LIES AND FALSE TRUST.....
    I KNOW A FEW MYSELF
    BUT A TRUE FRIEND U WOULD KNOW BY THE LOOK ON
    THERE FACE ........FLOW HEAD TELL ME MO!
     
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    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    one love

    feeling how you putting your feelings down loving your flow keep your head up and associate with good people if not then *** um all
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feel ya flow One!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  5. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's nice to know you guys can relate. I makes me feel better knowing i'm not the only one going through crap, and we can be there for each other.
    Thanks
    One_Love
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now, you know, i am really feelin' this piece, gurl. it's tyght. keep on scribin', because you know i told you that your poetry is therapy. keep on keepin' it real, i'm lovin' it!
     
  7. TheRock

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    Off the top of my head from my reaction

    No not what too tell you I wish I could take away your pain
    take all out of this chapter of life and see what you've gained
    its over now and acceptance is easier said then accepted
    in some ways it can be looked at as an education or a unwanted lesson
    in some ways it can be taken as a blessing to stop this certain path
    that could have you even more worse off and oh so depressed and sad
    so be grateful now for what you have be blessed that you be
    accept it as his lost and sista maybe it was not meant to be
    what comes and goes comes around for those so lost and confused
    and they may never get it even when they become the brokenhearted, deceived and confused
    Yet in time your love for self with come through and show you
    that before anyone can love and you love someone else you have to first love you
    Right now I wish you the best and I hope learn Gods love
    Its his love that brings pure joy and will never have you looking back on what was
    It shows to love today as it is and wait for tomorrow but please leave yesterday behind
    You never know when, you never know how, you never know when its your time



    Love yourself now sista and pray it will all come together
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gods love is ALWAYS true :angel1:
    Lovin you..... :wink:
     
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    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Rock

    If only you could understand. Trust has been broken so many times how could I trust again.....I'll only get hurt again....as of now there is no friends....only people.....there is no god.....only myself......what do i live for.......good question......I often ask myself the same thing.....life.....beauty......fun.....but not friends or god. If only you could understand.
    Thanks for your input though.
    One_Love
     
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    this too shall pass ...

    nice flow One_Love

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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