Black Poetry : Truth

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  1. Diamonddoll

    Diamonddoll New Member MEMBER

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    Hey to my folks out there. I am looking for feed back. I am finally spreading my wings and sharing my poetry with the world. Let me know what you think. Please be honest







    “You can’t handle the Truth”
    is what he said

    So why down the path of deception was I lead.
    Things between us seemed to be flowing in
    Harmony
    There was a sense of happiness cause he was on me
    And I was on him
    Cause in him I saw a good friend
    But then it all came real in this way,
    The whole situation changed in a day

    I was sitting at work and the phone on my desk rang
    So not suspecting anything, I answered in my usual
    Professional way.
    But the voice on the other side asked. “Do you know my man?”
    Then I thought. “Here we go again”

    She wasn’t rude nor disrespectful, She just wanted to know why my voice
    Was on his machine.
    What did this mean?
    “I am his wife of 4months, we have children and he hasn’t been home. Do you know what’s going on?”

    My mind scanned through times and conversations we had,
    No clue could have lead me to think he was a married man
    My first mind was to be spiteful and fill her eyes with secret rendezvous, quiet dinners,
    Long conversations and plans to be together.

    I don’t know about you, but I have a conscience, so I let her know that
    We were nothing but friends
    And at that point what we had would have to end.
    I didn’t hit the hater juice cause I could have incriminated you.
    But I know what she’s going through

    I am sure she has stayed up all night waiting for you
    Thinking to herself “What did I do?”
    All I can think is “What the Hell is wrong with you.”
    And you want to say that I can’t the truth.


    Here’s the truth, you want her cake and you want mine too
    So instead of being honest you figured “why should I chose. I have
    A wife at home taking care of me
    And another woman taking care of my fantasies. I am a man and women should
    Expect this of me.”


    You got the nerve to call yourself a King.

    What you should have done from the gate, was not even look my way
    You knew that when you came to me, you intent was evil from the beginning
    Your not a King you’re a slave, cause Kings don’t conduct themselves in that way
    I will not feed into the “So called Game”

    Now just think about this, when your with me who do think she’ callin
    Don’t get yourself caught in thinking that she’s fallin so in love with you, that she can
    Make due with what you’re putting her through
    Us women have an intuition that’s so strong, that our souls know when something
    Is going on

    If you don’t want to be the victim of foul play, you must play the game of life with rules that read this way:

    What’s good for you is good for me. The apple doesn’t fall from the tree. Most important is what goes around comes back around. An eye for and eye, a tooth for a tooth. This what is really the TRUTH.
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some lie so much it spews from their mouths easier than the truth. The message hit like a bullseye, this was a strong flow. Welcome to destee, make yourself at home.
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi diamonddoll and welcome,
    This was a beautiful piece, I like the way you delivered it, which was quite well.
    When a man cheats on a woman, ask yourself...who's really being cheated? We are the Universe, who can cheat us?
    wonderful write up poet, keep the flows comming
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome from above as i bless this some love
    welcome to the house of peace & respect u kin
    welcome to the family tyte drop here continue on ! :hi:
    :terrific:
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to the site! This is a great drop - hope to read more from ya.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome to destee.com
    enjoyed your flow
    tight write
    hope to read more of you

    also join us in voice chat as well
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    Peace
    Angel
     
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