Black Poetry : ~Truth~

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  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hate when you won't see the truth
    Pretend
    the signs aren't there
    You deny it so many
    times
    But then say you don't care


    You don't admit when we're right
    When it
    comes to things you hate to hear
    I'm sure
    down in your heart you know it's true
    But yet
    you still hollar at people you hold dear


    I know you don't want to hear this
    But I
    think you know it's true
    All I want to do is
    help you out
    But it's hard to get through to
    you

    Everyone sees it
    long before you
    do
    Like when you don't belive us about guys

    Until they say "we're through"

    You
    make me so confused
    I don't know why I try

    And when I go to bed at night
    I lay there
    and I cry

    You may think I have no reason

    To sit there and do it
    But belive me I do

    Cuz if I didn't I'd cut and hit

    I
    did it once before
    Before you became my friend

    And now my biggest fear is
    Doing it all
    over again

    You're one of the few reasons

    That I'm still alive
    But when you go and
    act like this
    It makes me wanna die

    I
    always felt so lonley
    Until I had met you

    But now I'm feeling that way again
    And I
    don't know what to do

    But I want you to
    know
    No matter what you say or do
    I will
    ALWAYS
    Be there for you
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt the compassion the pain and emotions flowing
    if only they knew the heart of u tyte write poet......
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes the truth hurts too much to clearly see, but it helps to have someone there when the fall comes, and it will...this had a very genuine feel to the words.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tru' dat, BlatinaPoet.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is beautiful and heart felt, girl. Wow, great piece.