Black Poetry : TRUTH

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SensualReality, Apr 27, 2004.

  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 26, 2004
    Messages:
    777
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    high school student
    Location:
    Tennessee
    Ratings:
    +2
    I decided to change me I decided to do me.I`m tired of trying to please you and I`m tired of the loose skrews.Now it seems everyone is trying to be the same.Step up ya game and try to maintain.I love my life and what God has blessed me with a family and a man who gives me happiness.Seems the devil is tryin to break me through back the rake off dried leaves.I want the sun to shine on all this craziness.Pick up where we left off on laziness.My pride and heritage shines through me.That`s why I`m in love and a (true) hip hop groupie.None of these rappers have the skillz like Mos Def and Kweli.Why You trying to change the world with your currupt thinking?Wake up please and stop blinking.That`s why you don`t get the picture the clear site infront of you.Don`t let a soul misguide you or turn you loose.Hold on to your dream and goals.Make a living outta what you know not silver and Gold.God is your light your truth and every breath.Get a dose of the truth it`s good for your health.
    :sand:
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    Large dose of truth here, in God you will find it every time. Flow on, poet of the week.
     
  3. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 26, 2004
    Messages:
    777
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    high school student
    Location:
    Tennessee
    Ratings:
    +2
    THANX WATZ:wink:
     
  4. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 6, 2001
    Messages:
    1,443
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    business/management
    Location:
    maryland
    Ratings:
    +1
    just do what you do and only you know if it is you and if it pleases you... lovely flow
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    yes yes yes upon the watchful eyes of thy Father u will recieve it all
    very nicely done
     
  6. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 5, 2003
    Messages:
    4,020
    Likes Received:
    32
    Occupation:
    strength coach
    Location:
    Seattle, WA
    Ratings:
    +32
    Word! Stay true to yourself, young lady. This was well posed.
     
  7. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 26, 2004
    Messages:
    777
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    high school student
    Location:
    Tennessee
    Ratings:
    +2
    Thank you all and I will remain true to myself :hot:
     
  8. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Dec 27, 2003
    Messages:
    582
    Likes Received:
    4
    Occupation:
    working for Paradise (Jannah)
    Location:
    Lawton, OK
    Ratings:
    +4
    SensualReality

    that blazing last line said it all......

    Peace and Blessings
     
  9. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 26, 2004
    Messages:
    777
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    high school student
    Location:
    Tennessee
    Ratings:
    +2
    Thank you so much I repeat that line often :lol:
     
  10. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    May 23, 2001
    Messages:
    2,715
    Likes Received:
    56
    Occupation:
    people
    Location:
    Florida
    Ratings:
    +56
    :bowdown: Powerful Prose...Very Very Powerful!

    From the first line to the very last drop of poetry...this grabbed my very soul and would not let go.

    I Thank You! Your last two lines dropped the bomb. :spinn:


    "God is your light your truth and every breath.Get a dose of the truth it`s good for your health."


    Joyce

    "Jesus said, 'I am the way, the truth, and the life. No one comes to the Father except through Me.' " —John 14:6

    :spinstar: :spinstar: Congrats On Poet Of The Week...It Is Well Deserved! :spin: :spin:




     
Loading...