Black Poetry : Truth

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kasperr56, Jul 7, 2003.

  1. Kasperr56

    Kasperr56 Member MEMBER

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    I open my heart up to you and now that it is closed
    Something inside of me feels so empty without you in my life
    My heart crys for you but my mind knows this can't be
    Has I need to get out and see what else is their
    I know I may lose you for the rest of my life but that what I have to do
    When we are apart their are all kinds of feelings but when we are together some of those feelings disappear
    So were does this leave us are we so far gone that their will never be anything for us again
    My body use to always cry for your pressence and my heart was connected to yours
    Your touched felt heavenly and your kiss felt divine
    Now I'm without you and without a touch of a women
    Oh how I fein for a women and how I just what that touch
    Yet I want all that other stuff that where you call me out of the blue when you just lay in bed and just hold me in your arms
    When we take a walk and walk passed a park and you want me to give you a push on the swings
    Now I sit at home all alone with nothing and a tear rolls down my eye and I wish we could go back and fix all that with wrong
    I wonder how I can love you and know we shouldn't be together how do I push you away and want you to be right next to me at the same momment as I pust with one arm and pull with the other oh so lost I'm in this black place with the walls just getting closer and closer.
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man, im feelin you :( take youtr time though :) tyte flow poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well felt ........the pose of an heart that only want love
    let ya pen continue !!
    very nice piece
     
  4. emprezz

    emprezz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Torn. What a confusing, frustrating feeling. Taking a time out heals that. It is wonderful to see a man pour his heart out like that. You are a strong soul. Continue...

    Peace
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nicely written...tyte piece...
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was wrapped up in this :)
     
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