Black Poetry : TRUTH -LOVE REVISITED ... THE SEQUEL

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  1. Ms_MochaB

    Ms_MochaB Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I EXPOUNDED ON OUR LOVE, BECAUSE IN MY MIND IT FELT SO REAL
    TODAY I FOUND OUT THE TRUTH ... LOVE IS MORE THAN AN EXPRESSION OF HOW YOU FEEL ...

    YOU MADE ME MELT JUST THE WAY YOU LOOKED AT ME THROUGH THOSE BROWN EYES ... BUT YOU WEREN'T LOOKING AT ME, YOU WERE GLARING AT ME ...
    ALL THE WHILE, IN THE BACK OF YOUR MIND WONDERING WHY?
    WONDERING WHY YOU DARED TO WALK THIS PATH ONCE AGAIN
    WONDERING WHY YOU WOULD EVEN THINK OF ME BEING CONSIDERED A FRIEND.

    BUT NOW I KNOW WHY I HAVEN'T HEARD "I LOVE YOU" SINCE SOMETIME LAST NOVEMBER, BUT I THOUGHT WITH ALL WE WERE GOING THROUGH, IT WAS YOUR ACTIONS THAT WOULD HELP ME REMEMBER.
    BUT I DON'T WANT YOU NOW, KNOWING THAT YOU LOVE SOMEONE ELSE.
    RIGHT AT THE TIME WHEN I'M FEELING MY WORSE ... YOU SHOULD'VE MADE ME FEEL MY BEST.

    HURTFUL THINGS DONE TO THE ONE WE SAY WE LOVE; HARSH WORDS SPOKEN; ACTIONS MASQUERADE ... IN THE END I WONDER WHO REALLY GOT PLAYED.
    I WAS IN THIS THING FOR REAL, SO OF COURSE MY PAIN IS INEVITABLE ... BUT YOU ... YEAH YOU ALWAYS BOUNCE BACK QUICKLY.
    WERE YOU AIMING FOR THE KNOWN CONCEPT OF "IT'S EITHER GOING TO BE YOU OR ME ... AND IT AIN'T GOING TO BE ME"; OR WAS IT THE "GET THEM BEFORE THEY GET YOU" THING?

    I DON'T KNOW, BUT MY LOVE IS AUTHENTIC ... STAMPED WITH A GUARANTEE
    MY LOVE IS PATIENT ... THAT IS WHY I COULDN'T FORESEE YOU NOT LOVING ME ... I DON'T KNOW WHY IT WAS REVEALED TO ME ME THIS WAY.

    SO I STEP AWAY FREELY, SEVERING ALL BOUNDED TIES ... KNOWING WHAT I FELT WAS REAL ...

    TRUTH IS GENUINE AND HONEST ...
     
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    Your dignity intact, your words exact!
     
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    YES MY DIGNITY IS INTACT ... BUT MY HEART IS BROKEN ...AGAIN
    PLEASE PRAY FOR ME ...
     
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    When you are being real, but the one you love is not, because of insecurities, game playing, what have you, it's painful when you realize this and have to deal. Genuinely expressed and felt poet.
     
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    felt every emotion that flowed
    and i send my warmth upon u
    for what's broken shall mend
    in the depth of realism & truth
     
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    Sister, you are in my prayers and your victory is assured.
     
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    ... THANK YOU :bye:

     
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    ... THANK YOU FOR MORE THAN YOU'LL EVER KNOW ... :welldone:

     
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    ... THANK YOU FOR BEING REAL ... NO SUGAR COATINGS HERE :bingo:

     
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