Black Poetry : Trust

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Look at the marks my tears leave.
    For when I cried you took joy.

    Now time has turned the
    table on your dreams.

    You know I never trusted you.

    Shall I keep the commandment
    and turn a cheek.
    I have free will.

    How will I choose?

    Deep inside I have always known
    that I was better than you.
    So now to abandon my soul
    lower than you crawled would
    be a curse forever.

    But I do have free will.
     
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    Froggy1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    free will, can come at times so ill, but at times where you feel like someones out tokill, nice man nice
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome scribing ya on fire bruh !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, you do have free will, and this piece is a warning of what that will is free to chose. Flow on then poet.
     
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