Black Poetry : TRUST YOU AGAIN?

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  1. DA BROTHER LOVE

    DA BROTHER LOVE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I first met you, there was not a soul
    That I loved in this world more.
    A freind like no other, we were like one.
    There was no one as beautiful as you...
    You're a part of me, as I am part of you.
    I was happy just as long as I had your love.
    But In time, you found a newer love...
    So what happened to make us fall apart?
    You left me in the dark, all alone.
    Is it something they have that I do not?
    That makes you think I dont deserve your love?
    When you took your love, you took a part of my soul.




    Its like a red rose turning black before my eyes




    Its happens everytime I put my trust in you again




    If love was real, then why do I despise you tonight?




    Oh I swear Ill never put my trust in you again





    Fast forward to another place...
    When I see you on another day.
    I began to see you in a whole other way.
    Im reminded you are so beautiful to me...
    How I love to just hold you close to me.
    Please tell me you feel the same for me.
    Will you love me or leave me torn apart,
    once again like my first love?
    Why am I not worthy of your love?
    This is a pain that so familiar is to me.
    Its the only feeling that Ive ever seen...
    Everytime that I open up my heart.


    I get more pain for me to carry around inside...




    It happens everytime I put my trust in you again.




    Oh Darling, why do you make me to cry?




    Oh, I swear Ill never put my trust in you again.





    But on this a new day, Im so glad to see...
    I finally found the one for me.
    Now everytime you see me, I wear a smile!
    False alarm... she is no different...
    Here comes the rejection.
    Even my newest love is not with me now...
    How does everybody around me...
    Find the love that I have never seen?
    How long before I close the door?
    That leads into a love for us...
    If everytime I begin trust...
    I feel the same pain I felt before?




    All I want is love, but I am constantly denied.




    It happens everytime I put my trust in you again.




    Look what youve done to me, oh how I wish that you would die!




    Oh I swear Ill never put my trust in you again.
     
  2. sweettee29

    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH SUGA YOU WISH I WOULD DIE

    YOUR HEART WILL HEAL

    YOU JUST WATCH AS TIME GOES BY

    TRUST YOU SAY YOU HAVE NONE

    YOU DONT KNOW WHAT YOU HAVE DONE

    YOU NEVER PAID ATTENTION #1 FOR A START

    YOU THINK YOU DID BUT YOU NEVER REALLY DID YOUR PART

    OR MAYBE IT WAS THE LOVE YOU WAS GIVEN

    OR MAYBE IT WAS THAT LOVE LIFE YOU WAS LIVEN

    I REALLY DONT KNOW

    BUT I KNOW I HAD TO GO

    YOU THINK I DONT LOVE YOU

    BUT THIS DEPARTURE HAS ME OH SO BLUE

    THEN YOU THROW ANOTHER CHIC IN MY FACE

    THAT SH*T MAKES ME SO MAD MY HEART STARTS TO RACE

    SAYIN THAT SHE DID YOU THE SAME AS I

    MY MY MY YOUR HEART WILL HEAL AS TIME FLIES BY

    THERE IS ABSOLUTLY NO OTHER QUITE LIKE ME

    SO DO YOU THINK ITS ALL WOMEN PROBABLEE PROBABLEE

    NO POSSIBILITY OF YOU OH NO NEVER THAT MY DEAR

    TO FACE A PROBLEM WITH YOURSELF WOULD BE AN UNTOLD FEAR

    SO YOU LASH OUT AT ME SPEAKING OF TRUST

    WAS IT TRUE LOVE YOU WERE FEELING ARE YOU SURE IT WASNT LUST

    BUT I WILL SOFTEN YOUR HEART WITH A REALLY SWEET BLOW

    I ALWAYS LOVED YOU SO MUCH BUT WHAT MADE ME LEAVE IS YOU ACT LIKE YOU DIDN'T KNOW

    SWEETTEE29
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    First put your trust in "You" ...
    for to Thine of self, be true.
    Only then will you find love anew
    but you must first seek love in you
     
  4. 4EVERLUV

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    DA BROTHER LOVE:
    I'm really feeln' this scribe.
    Boy can I relate. TRUST is
    a powerful emotion. But at
    some point you have to take that chance
    so dont let 1 or 2 spoil it for you.
    They say you should luv like
    you you've never been hurt.
    Same goes for trust, trust
    like you've never been betrayed.
    Really, Really diggn' this write.

    Much luv to u and I hope
    one day you will TRUST again.
     
  5. DA BROTHER LOVE

    DA BROTHER LOVE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the feedback...



    I forgot to explain the poem...

    I think if I told you the meaning behind it... It might put some light to things.

    The poem is an overall analogy of my relationship with women.

    The first verse is an analogy of the relationship with my mother, and the rejection I felt when my sisters were born... When it was just me and my mother, I was in heaven. Then my sisters were born, and our heaven was over, because I had to share my love. It seemed like my mother even started to bond with my sisters more than she did with me. There were times when I felt like she loved them more than me. Growing up, there were many days where the females in the house would rally up against me in some kind of battle of the sexes or something. There were so many nights where I would be in my room alone with a heart full of anger. I had nowhere to focus that anger except on the women in the house. I can recall countless nights where I would curse my mother in the privacy of my room. My father was hardly ever home, but I hated him too, so it wouldnt make any difference for him to be there. I was like an outsider, the only boy in a house full of women. Perhaps it was this situation that effected my outlook on women, because I have always looked at them as a source of pain and anger. It reminds me of the feeling of being unloved.

    The second verse is an analogy of my romantic relationships with women, and my issues with rejection and anger affected me as I got older. I was constantly reminded of the women that made me feel like I wasnt worthy to be loved. After awhile I started expecting rejection, this eventually turned into a self fulfulling prophecy. Since I was secretly expecting to be rejected by every woman that I came into contact with, I developed a poor self image. This image resulted in me getting rejected in the meanest and horrible ways a person could ever get rejected. The feeling of being constantly rejected by the one you adore is the single most horrible feeling I ever felt. So many times I was left alone in my room, with nothing but pain and sadness from another rejection. I had no one to talk to... I couldnt talk to my family... all I had was me. Eventually this pain turned into anger. It was this anger that helped to manifested a very profound hatred for the female species.

    The third verse relates to my last girlfriend. This was in a time when I was just beginning to get over the rejection of the past, and started to believe that I was worthy to be loved. Thats when I met her. I thought she was special, and different from any other girl I ever met. Since she seemed to be different to me, I began to trust in her. I did things with her and took her places that I had never took a girl before. Everytime I was with her, I smiled. I started to believe that she would never be the kind of girl that would hurt me deliberately. The biggest mistake I could have ever made was telling her my secrets. Little did I know that there would come a time when she would use those secrets against me. It would seem as if every woman that I have ever put my trust in has hurt me deeply.

    I mean, is it me, or is it possible that every woman in this world is a cold hearted witch? Even when my outlook is positive, the women remain the same. So am I really the one with the problem? Or maybe my problem is that I trust too much. Perhaps it will all be solved if I stop trusting people altogether. No more sadness, no more pain.
     
  6. DA BROTHER LOVE

    DA BROTHER LOVE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks sweetie... that was truly a sweet gesture.... I only wish it was that easy to be explained...
     
  7. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well Your preachin some love no doubt. Well said & flowed out bro!
     
  8. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved the concept of this. Remember life is a game in which we have no choice but to play, therefore we must try to beat it before it beats us.
     
  9. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :)

    This was a very nice piece, reminds me of a song. Flow on Poet:)

    Much Love

    AM
     
  10. LURK

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    it was sad...but i enjoyed reading this peice,poet...it brought me back to thetime where i felt like that tambien..u know..i could really identify with how you were feelin with this...being a man myself,and livin with 3 beautiful women my whole life,trust,i can...one thing i learned is that you cant apreciate a woman until you can apreciate yourself...you dont have to go around trusting every woman u meet...trust takes time...unfortunately ,this is the world we live in...u know..survival of the mentally,physically,emotionally fit....yea,its a mans world ,but it aint nuthin W/O a woman...you'll meet that special one for you..in due time...

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