Black Poetry : TRUST ME WEN I SAY DIS, U JUS DONT UNDERSTAND!!

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  1. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Trust me wen i say dis, u jus don't understand

    tell me...

    tell me...plz....

    iight..ok...buh trust me wen I tell u dis, u jus wudn't understand..

    Imagen waken up to a rainy day,
    buh u kno on the otha side its sunny,
    buh trust me huney u jus don't understand!
    cuz wen i wake up,
    all I feel is pain, yo dis **** is in sane,
    I don't think u hearin me mane! it getz worst dan dis,
    I cry out the blue,
    dis **** hurts 2 much 2 be true! wut I feel,
    dawg u have no clue!
    all this junk stickz to my brain cellz like glue
    yo derrs not a day in life dat I don't feel it,
    its jus apart of me
    dat my eyez burn wit fear cuz I kno deep down inside dat I don't wanna shed anotha tear
    but I aint say dat I wanna go get drunk off bear
    buh trust me man u jus don't understand!
    dayz wen I hear out my ears,
    and thangz dat I c thrugh my eyez,
    my homeguhz gettin attention like i aint even mention
    it makez me feel like i aint worth ****,
    or dat i aint eva gone be worth ****!
    dawg I don't even think u experiences dis **** be4
    cuz dis be on da real, and it got me thinkin, wut is my life'z deal?
    yo I dont have to appeal to dis,
    I can jus kill or steal a lie and make cries into jokes,
    u kno..buh trust me dawg u aint feelin dis,
    so jus walk instead on tryin to hear me talk....o and still u say plz o tell me, so u say u wanna hear mo?
    but i ask, wut is it dat u wanna kno? cuz I'm frunna go!
    ...iight..I'm about 2 go deep wit chu, instead of feelin like I aint worth it
    now i feel like life aint worth dis,
    I c peoplez rising from graves,
    buh me! naw. im fallin into graves where i once walk paves,
    dat my eye sight is like im wearing shades cuz err thang seemz faded,
    so I guess dis is wut i maded thangs to be,
    cuz all i c is gray! and oh...no..my nugga..dis aint funni,
    I cant c no color!
    im 2 far gone into the twilightz of the unknown full of pain
    dat i am stuck in the wayz of claustrophobia of depression,
    wallz close in more and more each day,
    dat my wallz are gettin smaller by the second
    Im losing lifez space,
    dat it seemz to be takin in my oxygen! i cant
    breathe no more man! the wallz are now squeezing in my lungs,
    i cant even sang of sungz! so trust me hun,
    u cant compete wit dat!!! so now wen I tell u dat u dont understand,
    jus take my word on it,
    and listen. or jus shut da *** up and try 2 visiualize it!! u kno wuh dawg,
    i gotta question 4 ya,
    have u eva felt like ending it on ur own,
    YEA NUGGA, IM TALKIN BOUT LIFE, ENDING YO LIFE!! taking a glock and puttin it against yo head and ending yo lifes clock! o so u ask y the head? well i say thats whurr all the pain starts,
    in the mine! then it goes to the body and the pain ends up being apart of ur soul
    anymo questionz?...gud...so let me finish,
    dis life i have is diminishing quickly
    I cant even rethink an hour wen i thought life being of joy....****.....I feel like my life is a toy,
    cuz i kno the devil'z been playing wit it,
    and I regret it,
    4 letting him take ova, buh wuh can I do?,
    Ive been trying,
    yet dening ..so now my soul is slowly dieing
    and i kno i shouldn't have stop climbin that rope of hope,
    buh sumbody shock it hard,
    and i fell unda a painfuly spell,
    dat took my hands and my strength!
    so for wut its worth,
    ima take dis gun and kill myself hun!! cuz pain like dis aint worth living
    o and dont try to stop me cuz it aint even worth it!
    buh trust me wen i told chu dis,
    dat u jus dont understand wuh im going thrugh!
    cuz its sumthang to be described as hell baby!


    dedicated to myself and many others who feel dis way

    derr mite be a part 2
    buh wuh do u dink will happen next? if i continue

    :happens:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep twist and one will never understand da pain !
     
  3. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    STANK YA MY BRATHA
    DEY WILL NEVA UNDASTAND DA PAIN DAT IM FEELIN RITE NOW
    I CANT EVEN MOVE ON WIT LIFE


    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey ga you really packed a punch with this one continue on please.:flowers:
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stank ya my sistah nevar 4 da luv
    buh idk if i shud continue, buh 4 u and otha plpz, i jus mite
    much luv


    blackluv and bp
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    One may not understand nor feel what self feel
    but keepinng ya head up high and holding faith
    surely u can move forward beyond the pain in life .
     
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    it took me a sec to get ya lingo but this was....hmmm, i'm thinking of a word to describe it........guess i'll have to settle for awesome writing.
     
  8. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stank ya RICH 4 da incouraging words ciz i really need to hear dat

    stank ILL for showin a sista sum luv and 4 da comment

    much luv 2 poetz


    blackluv and bp
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Deep thoughts race through my mind as
    I read this piece poet I love all your work
    Much Love Sis Ambition
     
  10. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    long tyme no c my bratha ...lol
    its gud to hear frum u
    o and stank ya 4 the luv and appreciation


    blackluv and bp
     
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