Black Poetry : 'trugglin'*

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (off the dome)*


    u **** right--
    i gets my 'truggle on--
    dirt up unda shawt nails--

    i be digging fo' betterment--
    seems i'm in hell's
    cesspool--
    shoveling handfuls a sin
    with the devil at my left shoulder--

    and angels in my right ear

    i.
    stand accountable fo' all i do--
    'not u but--
    me...
    not him--but--
    i.'**

    pressin on in rags wit' 'rinkles
    never gots starch--
    ax my peoples--
    but--
    seemingly--
    i see--
    shiny linings thru--
    darker clouds cuz--
    even dark
    turns
    to
    light--

    and such is the me--

    i'm leff
    'trugglin'*


    sean.
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your "off da dome" is outta control!! :D This heah be tyte..... (hey Sean the 2nd stanza was a killa wit a deadly visual for me) I'm lovin' your way of processin'....


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    ya dome is str8 coz dis be banggin!
    bring da flows
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2. thank you for the compliment.
    asnything you write is outta control!!!!

    keepreading

    sean
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    RICH. I appreciate the read fellow wordsmith.

    keepreadingthose words--
    they are talking.

    sean
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