Black Poetry : True

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Twofish, Nov 19, 2002.

  1. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    without apprehension I wander
    into the vast Depths of your Song
    anxious, with tension I ponder
    if in contrast it could be wrong

    stealing a moment in history
    submerged within perplexity
    feeling I'm holding a Mystery
    emerging from what is vexing me

    enraptured by the greatness of knowing
    enchanted by what is inside
    I'm captured by the Spirit you're showing
    recanted harmonious tides

    flowing through me as if water
    cleansing my Being anew
    growing within like my daughter
    mending and healing comes True

    THE LESSONS OF LIFE...ARE THE LESSONS OF YOU
    NOTHING ON EARTH COULD BE MORE REAL OR TRUE

    Eternal Commitment and Love

    2fish 2002
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    touching piece twofish.

    Thanks for sharing.....


    N2
     
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    Queen_of_Spades Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was touch by the nice and meaningful flows of this one. Did I read this right? You're in the ATL? How nice.
     
  4. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks N2 and Queen - I was inspired after reading others last night :)

    Many Blessings
    2fish
     
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    Two words.....Touching & Beautiful. Peace.
     
  6. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you so much legacy21 :)
    you know I am originally from tha D!!! (I miss home too :( )

    Get down wit yo bad self!

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    2fish.


    i can't wait to hear this one put to music! :D
    (well... at least it sounded like a beautiful
    song to me! ) :)
    thank you for your ink, chile!

    itsallLove,
    elayne.
     
  8. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks :) :) :) :) :) :) :) old friend! yes it could be a song - actually that was kinda the vibe I wrote it in becuz I'm stuck on this Lauryn Hill vibe, you know, how her songs be poems and songs all in one...anyway...I appreciate you gracing my spot...

    peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed dis was heart felt warm and very touching
    yes i hear da song of dis ...........ya need to take it to open mic.
     
  10. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RICHNE$$ you always make me feel so good to see you and read you - I just want to say thank you!!!

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