Black Poetry : True Sight

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Poetrymama, Sep 29, 2004.

  1. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like a speck of dust
    I rode the crest of Jesus'
    back
    too tired to fly on my own
    too many doubts of my purpose
    to be

    Weak and worn in soul but
    Jesus carried me to a place
    filled with Love without doubt
    I soar on my own with the shield
    in hand

    Ready to battle for the sacred destiny
    as my cape whipped around me
    Page by Page he showed me the journey
    of life can be long and hard but
    with his faith in this soul I stand tall and erect
    without the need to doubt his place in my life

    Winds whipped around me as I venture to depths
    through instructions of faith and glory of Him
    True Sight of Jesus with my sword raised high
    as my cape battled the wind
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful testament of faith. nice work
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Our faith grants us the wind beneath our winds that we thought wasn't there. I'm really feeling this sis. What a lovely sight.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    for thy love of he this was beautifully laid out
    and a warm love , rest on thy wings to flight
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hung on your words, cause they got caught in my throat as I inhaled...
    beautiful piece, thanks for sharing your spirit
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was posed well feelin ya flow
    praise on dis was awesome
    Peace
    Angel
     
  7. Poetrymama

    Poetrymama Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    re:True

    Thanks for commenting on poem. Sorry it took me so long to comment back.
     
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