Quiet Poetry Lounge : True Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DaFlavaFul, Apr 25, 2011.

  1. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    For my Son



    Overwhelmed, yes, overwhelmed
    The feeling in my chest
    Is at best, overwhelming.
    How do I explain this? This thing.
    That makes my heart contracts and relaxes
    On a whim.

    That makes me sing, yeah sing!
    An aria of love to the heavens above
    And make my ears ring….
    Ding ding
    With peals of laughter that rival the angels.

    His stare so innocent, soothes
    My weary soul as he smiles
    His entire world reflecting in his eyes, Me
    He loves me and I love him
    Unconditionally
     
  2. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    *Somebody pass the tissue!*


    I LOVE this "ode" your son.


    In the words of Sister Coco....This was "SOUL DEEP!"
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very heart felt .
     
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