Black Poetry : True Love...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Teena, Feb 21, 2008.

  1. Teena

    Teena Member MEMBER

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    There could never be a deeper love
    That flows between me and thee
    Two hearts that beat as one
    Bound for clandestiny

    Our love it knows no bounds
    Our love knows no fear
    It spreads beyond the universe
    Out into the atmosphere

    True love is for believers
    It won’t fade with time
    Our love will get better with age
    It’s like a vintage wine

    Like true love throughout the centuries
    Romeo and Juliet, we have a history
    Not conquered by death, not even conquered by time
    Our love remains a mystery, like the scene of a crime

    Though the world around us
    Tries to destroy our bond
    It continues to ripple
    Like the water in a pond

    Let them try with all their might
    Let them continue to try and fight
    They will never be able to reach the height
    Of a love that goes beyond their sight
     
  2. LovesDestiny

    LovesDestiny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Teena, how beautiful!!! This was absolutely a great piece. There is nothing like True Love!!!!
     
  3. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW

    Teena
    Welcome to Destee

    When I read great flows the title of this reply is my only thought after reading.

    True Love is a great flow. It points to what is accomplished when two become one focus. Love as you wrote transcends time and circumstance.

    True love is a joining of intellect and soul felt understanding.

    When love is taken on. Time can't be given measure. By doing so, years pass easily without effort and much joy is gathered in that time.

    Keep flowing, I am looking forward to reading more of your measure.:book:
     
  4. Teena

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    Thank you
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This flow how such a sincere feel, and was posed beautifully poetess.
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love your tribute to love!

    thanks.
    Desert Storm
     
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    Hi Teena
    So true
    Through out the ages there
    is nothing that can replace
    the feeling that comes from true love
    very lovely poem sis

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome within your words spoken deep to me
    nice to see u flowin in the poetic family here
    again welcome to destee.com
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    feeling the love

    and the power poet

    great piece
     
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