Black Poetry : True Love

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  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    True Love

    If I was your man
    You would never be alone
    Even when I am not there,
    If I was your man
    I'd read the consolations of the stars to you
    And every time I miss you
    I would look up
    Knowing that you are right there with me
    Looking up at them
    At the same moment
    At the same time as I am

    If I was your man
    I would try to be your everything
    The air you breathe
    Would be mine as well
    The way you feel
    Would be the same way I would feel
    You pain would be my pain
    Your hurt would be my hurt
    Your tears would be my tears
    And when you laugh
    I also laugh
    Because it would be the same laugh
    That you would be laughing

    The mire essence of you
    Would give me existence
    It is you who would make me feel
    This way
    Every second,
    Every minute
    Every hour
    Every day
    Every week
    Every month
    And every year

    You have no idea
    What you would really mean to
    It would not just be your beauty
    That captivates my mind
    It would also be your mental conception
    That would have me fining for you
    Seconds to each minute
    After hours to days
    It is you who I would love

    I would love you for your
    Perfect imperfections
    And that little twinkles
    In your eyes
    When I see you
    From a distance

    And each kiss
    That I would ever received
    Would feels like the fist kiss
    We ever had
    To me
    You would be my perfect conception
    To what if would feels like
    To be truly in love
    Utterly unattainable
    Because I would love you
    For you for who
    You really are.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow !
    this was tyte right here, True Love
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey defiantson missed ya and you tyte flo's, flo on poet.:luvv:
     
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    To be loved for who we truly are, wow, if only. This was a very endearing scribe, beautiful.
     
  5. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks all I had to take a little break to get my thoughts right.
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome Back:)

    Welcome back d, this was a nice piece. Keep up the good work and i'll be lookin out for ya.

    1 luv,

    AM
     
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    True love... I really enjoyed this flo poet..
    Keep doin' ya thang....
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ^5 to you poet, thats' a very deep and true love...straight from the heart.
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was hot poet
    I was loving this piece
    Much Love Poet
     
  10. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all I had to take me some time to myself, been traveling doing this poetry thing but I will always maintain my status on here. Thanks for the love all.
     
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