Black Poetry : True Love

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  1. poetic_diva

    poetic_diva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As we walk the land
    hand in hand
    a feeling of pure bliss
    comes over us
    that we can't miss
    oh my your powerful kiss
    takes my breath
    oh how I wish
    we could go on like this
    forever and always
    this trickey maze
    of highs and lows, ups and downs
    can't compare to this daze
    you got me under
    as my heart shudders
    from you voice
    one look in your eyes
    I know your my only choice
    I know it was fate
    that helped me find my soulmate
    sent from above
    my one true love
    :flirt:
     
  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Very beautiful!
    The Blessings of
    finding ones soulmate!

    Lovely piece!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of love & peace
    welcome from above as i bless this scribe some love
    happy u here to share and flow apart of this family . :deal:
    :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin: :spin:

    true love :love:
    from the river
    of compassion
    inside ya eyez
    a deep affection
    of bliss have me
    my sweet all in a
    twist from da kiss
    of love u pose
    to u my single
    red rose as we
    journey in tyme
    cross da starz
    in orbit shine
    i knew it was fate
    as u took flyte
    this night inside
    da desires delight
    forth my beloveth
    from above i send
    u dis love :love:

    awesome lovely scribing just felt it flowing
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey welcome to destee!! i loved this scribe
    so feeling this vibe
    been there and still is:)
    thanks for sharing
    hope to read more
    of you!!!
    come join us in chat as well
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    Peace
    Angel
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: Hey and welcome poetic_diva!

    tell it sistah!

    true love one of the strongest things in the world. :heart:

    mo power and keep scrybing

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  6. poetic_diva

    poetic_diva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~PurpleMoon-Thank you, I love your quote at the end of the message.

    ~$$Rich$$-Thanks for the warm welcome. I'm glad you were feeling the flow. I enjoyed your creative poem you wrote in the message, it was very nice and sweet.

    ~To all-Thanks for the wonderful warm welcome, I feel like I've found a new poetry home. I look forward to posting more poems as well as reading more. I have learned very quick that all of you are very talented and creative. Much love and God Bless


    "I can do all things through Christ, which stregthens me"-Philippians 4:13 ;)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome and surely we all look to read more of u
    and feel da poetic pen u bring welcome home sistah because
    u are home here in embracement .......enjoy as u get the feel
    of the community
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was nice poetic so let me drop this right here

    oh I was from BELGIUM wearing a gown a cutie brown, booty round. met a boy from NYC like a gift to my click just lift and stick it in and I'll just moan and groan at home while we bone so strong, in deep search can't keep in touch make me freak so much he's hood buffed and good enough to take me in bed bive him cake so red, even though I'm across the Atlantic , got a boss Titanic he should cum and sink
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a pretty scribe you penned. Welcome to destee, hope to read more flows from you.
     
  10. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    how loving..and lovely...
    thanks for sharing...
     
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