Black Poetry : true love

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  1. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Last night she told
    us about how her
    husband will help her
    tape the WNBA games so
    she doesn't see the scores
    and even skip the
    halftime report and commercials
    for her, about how he
    will make her turn around
    and put her hands over her
    ears so as not to ruin
    the game for later, and
    he'll say, "OK, hum now,"
    and she'll start humming
    lalalalalalalalalalalala
    while he fixes the VCR,
    it's the combination of
    knowing the other person and
    caring so deeply, locked in
    the simplest of gestures
    that touches my heart,
    this is what it's all about -
    these little things
    A and I turn to each
    other, melting, and I
    tell our guest
    we want a love like that,
    that's exactly what we want
     
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    emrod89 Active Member MEMBER

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    don't we all! nice piece. :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis that kinda sweet love everyone lone for
    it's da small things that bring smiles
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt this. Real tyte.
     
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    Sweet, I enjoyed this very much!
     
  6. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks so much, y'all! :)
     
  7. Da1whoownslife

    Da1whoownslife Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved this........ We all want that type of love....... Keep writing... and remember keep it real with oneself......
     
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