Black Poetry : true love...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MissPoetik, Dec 18, 2002.

  1. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As the sun peaks through my window…
    You wake me with kisses of sweet melody
    I open my eyes and it’s you that I see
    As I prepare for one more hectic day
    Your rhythm sends me on my way
    Whenever right turns into wrong
    You soothe me with a soulful song
    And when love’s trials have me down
    You’re always so easy to be found
    Because you hold a place inside my heart
    And you’ve been my comfort from the start
    I’m saying this with one thing in mind
    MUSIC, you’re in my head all of the time…
    :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
     
  2. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can defintely feel this.... I relate to this one!!!! Much props to ya Poetess for writing such a beautiful expression!!! 1 Luv...
     
  3. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MissPoetik

    You had me going their for awhile.

    But, you switched it on me...at least it seemed that way to me.

    Great job...enjoyed it.

    :toast: :D
     
  4. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GOOD

    This is really good like the flow...
    Be blessed
    Queen:toast:
     
  5. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful

    one luv
     
  6. luvtoluv

    luvtoluv Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful.. simply beautiful!!
     
  7. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Scribe that love vibe sista!

    It is a wonderful thing when the heart does sing...and it ain't always just about a sex thang! Let ya heart sang for "True Love"!
    Blessings on Ya House!
     
  8. MissPoetik

    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    true love uncovered...

    thanks ya'll! hey monetary... you got it though. that's how i wanted it to seem, like i was talking about a person but it was music all along...
     
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