Quiet Poetry Lounge : True love vs. lady lust?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by asimplepoet, Apr 27, 2008.

  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lady lust will have you rebuking the truth for a lie
    Will have you trying to mount up and touch the sky

    Without the benefits of the mighty wings of love
    For love is a sustaining force from heaven above

    Lady lust leaves you pheening like a crack whore
    For she'll never satisfy you down deep to your core

    For her power lies in her europhic momentary high
    Pacifying you till you're unable to see where truth lies

    And you continue to settle for her small piece of the pie
    Never even giving true love any time at all to come nie

    And then you wonder why you feel the way that you do
    And why it seems that life keeps tossing you to and fro

    Could it be because you let the imiation take loves place
    Allowing her to consume you up and take you out the race

    When will you shake out of the hold that she has upon you
    And set yourself free so that true loves can shine through

    True love is not rude so she won't come in till you ready
    And that can't be till you and lady lust are no longer steady

    So the ball is in your court what shall you do from here on out
    Will you wait on true love on will you keep taking lady lust out
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, lust is a momentary fling, love takes you through the long haul. I think some folks don't even realize that lady lust has become their steady, until they really look her in the eye. Posed directly on point poetess.
     
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    Lust is a lie
    love is truth
     
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    re; hi

    good-afternoon asimplepoet,

    chatting and so on...


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    Lady lust will have you rebuking the truth for a lie
    Will have you trying to mount up and touch the sky

    Without the benefits of the mighty wings of love
    For love is a sustaining force from heaven above

    Lady lust leaves you pheening like a crack whore
    For she'll never satisfy you down deep to your core

    For her power lies in her europhic momentary high
    Pacifying you till you're unable to see where truth lies
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    just speechless as this reality for alot of us... not being able to shield away from LUST which is killer in some cases... has one letting thy body talk, instead of using common sense... what i'm saying that's why many relationships are doom from the start, as the 2 parties mistaken L-U-S-T for TRUE LOVE... ( aka... no courtship every happens ) could go on, but u have laid it out for one to absorb... in summary, keep preaching to the masses...


    have a nice day...

    sincerely,
    c.t.adams-///

     
  5. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reading this is like eating Raw sushi with hotsauce. You know brother's be talking about cuttin, but you got the real double razor edge sword with this one, " ThWill have you trying to mount up and touch the sky." Oooooo I got say it one mo gin Oooooo! That truth will definitely turn you inside out for the better. I love it Poetess!
     
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    Hi asimplepoet
    I really enjoyed your poem
    It is always best to wait on true love
    I agree. Because the union can be so wonderful
    When your heart is there to feel it in the body
    as well as yhe soul
    very nice poem

    Peace
     
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