Black Poetry : True Identity

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Corners harbor dust --
    mites
    Shadows make waste...
    Moods of you and I
    dance privately in a room
    ... to 1 beat ...

    The trees bear your
    soul's unrest, tampered
    by uneasiness --

    Thoughts ~ marked
    in birch-ROWAN-wood;
    stained ... AMBER ...I,
    always err on the
    side of truth and
    (I)dentit(he),

    ... but you can't see me
    because you hide ...
    I grow old
    ... social butterflies fill the air ...
    as a lonesome dove
    wishing to be nearer
    flying away into
    yester days
    when you swept your
    nakedness into that
    small section of a place

    I want you in my
    'forever' space ... not
    just sometimes or on an
    occasion
    and not in
    all four corners of
    the room


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "i want you in my 'forever' space...", now, if that's not tyght, i don't really know what is! i'm lovin' this piece, heyah....

    ~~letitflo~~
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lister~

    Thank you for pointing that out....


    That too, is my favorite line in this piece of peace!

    Thank you for reading ME!
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1000 posts?

    N2,

    yeah queen as you know the piece is off da chain!!! but, I noticed you have 1000 posts. Could you loan a brother some so I can move up the top 10 lists (ya know I'm jus' trippin")

    "10" x 100

    one love,blak
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak~

    You know I anticipate and lay in wait
    of your eyez to view pieces of ME~
    and your responses are
    always welcum!


    ~gettinN2thepointofyourbeing~

    1 :hear:
     
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