Black Poetry : True Communication

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rasheed, Dec 29, 2003.

  1. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't you know
    That true communication
    Produces a beautiful flow
    And so many by products
    It brings in tow
    Unification
    Of mind, spirit, soul
    Pavin' the way for unlimited peace to roll
    Surge in and take its place as lord of the scene
    Obliterate disunity, the low and mean
    Open the way for progress and the enlightened way
    All enemies to truth weed out and slay
    Elevation
    Of the human situation
    To Calipha on Earth with respectful participation
    Sharing the bounties without envy and lust
    Restoring the true meaning of "in G-d we trust"
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh yes yes yes:) this is so tight..communication is indeed a key..that keeps the wheel in motion..
    nice indeed
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u pose a master piece wow!!
    tyte drop
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Communication is certainly the key...can't have peace without it...thought provoking.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likin dis flow..yes yes indeed
    flow on
     
  6. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blue, RICH, watzinaname, mzblkangel

    Peace be unto you all kindred spirits. Communication is the hope of our Salvation

    Bless You All!
     
  7. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THIS IS SO ON POINT!

    I so loved this piece, the true essence of what I had tried to convey
    in my piece Poetic Freedom..Big ups to you my learned scribe!

    Blessings on your house! :yo:
     
  8. rasheed

    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks and Peace and Blessings.
    i searched for "Poetic Freedom" and didn't find it , Please repost or bring it to the fore.
    U've got me wanting to read it.
     
  9. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Communicated loud & clear...

    Keep 'em comin'.
     
  10. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Brother...

    How I do enjoy reading you and absorbing the wisdom...

    Scribe on Teacher...we're listening!
     
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