Black Poetry : Trow away bag (this is how i feld last week)

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Trow away Bag (this is how i feel)

    I listened to you...


    supported you...
    encouraged you..
    reached out for you...
    cause i have love for you...
    but when i shared my treu emotions because i wondered were this
    relationship was going to....
    you were suddenly trough?
    Now that youre moved on and everything is going well...
    you put this relationship to an end...
    Leave by twisting my words .....
    and say i dont see you as a friend...
    cause you know that that was not what i ment...
    it feld as if you trowed me away like a bag....
    do you think it doesnt hurt like........
    This aint about karma ....
    i would not do this...

    So here i was lying between ..
    the garbage...
    I,m blessed that an angel....came by the name of OSCAR......
    and said....""what are you doing here lying between all this...and who putted you here "?

    ""probebly somebody who didnt saw that you are VALUABLE""
     
  2. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Went through this recently
    Know the feeling well!!!!!!
    very nice flow....so honest

    hmmm....does "Oscar the angel" have any female cousins....lol j/k
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, I know this feeling, like you did all that, and felt all that, and for what? You poured the emotions out on the page.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this took me in i can feel every emotion flowed within
    scribe on
     
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    MacGeo Active Member MEMBER

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    the way i felt last week

    feel not like this any more
     
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    i know this feeling also...
    their loss...nice joint lady
    one love
    khasm
     
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    very deep
    we are feeling your worth sis
    wonderful drop
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is so beautiful, but
    I'm going 2 try not 2 cry.
    I'ma hold it 2gether, loved this.
     
  9. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks all:heart:

    i wanted to say to ya thanks for feeling me on this one...


    but dont.....



    its not a nice feeling..





    Love Libertylady:heart:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's not a nice feeling ?
    we live, ...we hurt, ...we love, ...we lose, ...we gain... and last but not lease...we learn, ...we grow wiser, ... we grow stronger ...and we move on...
    :wave: bye-bye to :fight: and hello to :luvv:
     
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