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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thepoetsean, Jun 11, 2001.

  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I now sit back and watch less--
    close iii's like


    GOD BLESS***

    the projects mean streets and hard vests--
    stanks smells and fragments remain grotesquue--
    yet i'm

    loving the feelin'

    streetlife is hardpressed.

    our messed remains stressed--
    and ain't all great,
    who knows how many of our peoples layin' in lakes?

    but

    to chase papes and trace hate--
    seem main fates--
    and our people keep it on

    no matter the stakes...



    (****.)


    sean.
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sean...

    "****" -- is right!

    Thought provoking
    scribe!

    Oneluv.
     
  3. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the read--

    that came from my demo cd.

    liked it?

    sean.
     
  4. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    leave me alone, sean...

    can't you see i'm comfortable in my project gear. i know it's a l'il ripe and **** but, hey, it's mine...see what i'm saying.:)

    flow
     
  5. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baller and N2

    i love the love and i thank you both for the read.

    sean.
     
  6. blackstar

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    :p

    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:
    :jumping: u got me thinking :jumping:
    :jumping: again. i like. since :jumping:
    :jumping: when u had a demo :jumping:
    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping:

    :p
     
  7. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now, you know, that i admire yo word usage...it's tyght what you bring to life. yes, indeed.

    ~~~inkdrops~~~
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    sean

    i know it all too well

    Much Respect My Soldier
     
  9. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sean

    **** dog... you take it to anutha level! love ya language patna...lol

    diggin da message...

    All Respect
    Reas
     
  10. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so'ja, Reas,

    thanks.

    sean.