Black Poetry : Tropical Storm

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Dec 3, 2003.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The flow of the rain
    A Tropical Strom

    Lightening
    Strike twice
    Lightening twice more
    The bolt of the lighten
    So firm, so strong

    The fire the body
    Adds steams to the water
    As the affect from the wave
    Gust the deep water.

    A fog of emotion
    Release in the mist
    As you tenderly
    Taste of my lips

    My arms hold firm
    My finger stroking your back
    A moan escape
    In the storm
    In the night

    The pour of the rain is the storm
    From the Rapture our spirit soars
    The rhythm increases more and more

    Feeling myself drowning in the bliss
    I am brought back by a passionate kiss
    I open my eyes feeling so warm
    In your arms the release of the storm
     
  2. triniti424

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    I love poetry that says it without exactly sayin it ya know lol ok I might be a lil tired lol but...
    sista blue...
    hats off to you :)
    this was a monsoon of passion :wink:
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

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    very nice i likes.......it was :hot:
     
  4. Hiclass_female

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    HOT!!! Im feeling this!
     
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    this is :hot:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    From my heavens

    the release of the strom
    a compassion sweet & warm
    splash water 2 water
    waves made as breakers crash
    caressin da soul
    feverish whispers roll
    moans flow chills of cold
    the thunder boltz
    light up da night
    as i watch from my flyte
    finger touch
    embrace made
    heated temp sparks of gold
    strong winds
    blowin with depth
    lips kisses blazin bliss
    eyes open to a night
    of the rapture of my delight
    like the tropical dance
    fruits of honey
    comfort of the body as it
    rain in the brain storm
    out da heavens

    sprinkle me babe sprinkle me !

    as the spirits soars above
    to remind u this was love
    captured in rapture of da
    storm to wake up the
    sleepin passion
    may the drops hold u
    and taste the drips of
    bliss from the rain that
    kiss ya lips again & again

    Da Mystery theme
     
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    wet passion mixed with fire and tyteness...
    keep doin' it

    jh
     
  8. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey triniti:laugh: yeah thats what i was doing...lol...thank you sister for the love:heart:

    hey sisters mzblkangel,highclass,SwtT ....laughing yes having a little fun...happy you like this drop:heart:

    hey j'hiah yes indeed..fire and water make steam..thank you for the love:heart:

    now brother Rich :laugh:i felted the storm brewing in the quiet zone and brought it up a level to let it roar fully(another storm is brewing another storm is coming)...Dear Mystery..:) *wink and a smile* :heart:
     
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    WOW...

    my mind is exhausted...
    and your words left my heart racing
    this flowed like "lava"...
    you truly know how to take
    one on the most...
    cosmic of journeys...
    thanks for the voyage...it was incredible!
     
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    alter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to me, the best poetry invokes thoughts and visions of nature, human and physical...by evoking storms and thoughts of passion, you combine the best of all worlds. a wonderful work, poet!
     
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