Black Poetry : Trix

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by candeesweet, Jul 4, 2015.

  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Callaborating with myself...

    It's not enough
    It got through
    To me
    Not finally
    In time
    But through
    The hole
    That devours us
    Mentally
    Not yet
    Physically ready
    Cause emotions
    To depend
    On where
    This will go
    Towards the truth
    Or
    The real abstract

    Now to be understood
    Individually
    But as a
    whole gotten through.
    Waking up in
    The inhibited.
    Side uncontrolled.

    Keep moving
    For words that relate
    To you
    Re search your brain
    for solutions
    Then if sown
    Salutations may be in need
    For the reasons of relations
    Like trust yourself:
    Skin eating disorder
    Cancer of the kin
    ***
    Bottom
    Procreating
    Marage
    Runs
    Side effect
    Representing new legislation
    Pole looting
    Individuals
    But together
     
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  2. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    I love the first stanzas, Candisweet,.,but i cant see the verses in yellow...
     
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