Black Poetry : Tripping In Black and White

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Aug 16, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This world is black and white

    Technicolor,

    When we fight well

    Them signs sure is a sight

    Whites only,

    In our darkest day hell

    Dismissing,

    Black and white

    What's a fellow if not my brother

    Eclipsing black and white

    That's the color of my bible

    No gray boy oversight

    Tripping over me and you

    Dipping in Black and White

    Everybody's in there too!


    Darryl Abdu Omari :read:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    I'm not sure if I
    fully understand this!

    But I know what it says to me.
    I enjoyed the read!

    Keep on dropping 'em!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u just go right ahead and tell the whole thang if u will
    speak on !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What I got from this is that everyone is equal but not treated as such. I hope I'm reading you right poet. You're pen has been on fire lately.
     
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