Quiet Poetry Lounge : trippin'* (short poem)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thepoetsean, Jul 4, 2001.

  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful essence
    Leading me through
    Astral states of thinking of she...
    Capitvating
    Killing my mind—
    Stalled—
    Trapped within the
    Awe
    Rendered by she...


    she leaves my head spinning...
    i be thrown off...continually.



    Sean.
     
  2. poeticdelight

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    can u say?

    CRUSH
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was so lovely
    not in a mushy way but
    so honest and great
    cuz sometimes
    trippin is an aight place
    to be!
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    Wow....

    Sounds like somebody's got you off balance....Tyte Scribe
     
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    Sean

    i can't lie to you dun

    this is a tight *** piece kidd
     
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    Short and sweet

    We need no more than what is said--well done--Amun-Ra :cool:
     
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    STR8 2 DA POINT

    :lovestruc :lovestruc :lovestruc
    SOMEBODY DEFINATELY
    GOT U TRIPPIN' ON EMOTIONS
    WHEN YOU WRITE SINCERE
    BEAUTIFUL WORDS
    SUCH AS THESE ;)
    :lovestruc :lovestruc :lovestruc
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well done poet!

    blak
     
  10. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sean

    to da poynt





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