Black Poetry : Triple FOOL (me)

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am two fools I know...
    once for loving,
    second - for saying so ~

    ...all in whining poetry...

    Just where is that wise woman,
    that would not be I~
    if only I would not deny?

    Then as the earth's
    inward narrow crooked lanes
    do purge sea waters fretful
    salt away

    I thought; if I could draw
    my pains through rhyme's vexation,
    I'd push all my hurt~~away
    My grief brought to numbers
    can't be so fierce
    for he tames it that
    fetters it in verse

    But when I have done so
    Some woman, her art and voice to show
    sets and sings my pain
    and by delighting my
    Destee Fam' -- free's me again
    Grief, which verse did at one
    time restrain
    To love and grief tribute -
    of verse belongs
    But not of such pleases when it
    is read
    Both are increased by these same songs
    Both their triumphs are published
    and I, which was two fools
    grow by three
    So who now are little wise
    .........the best
    ......fools
    ...be


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well this is mos' def' I must say...great!!! So what's new? well written pieces have become second nature I see.....Nikki G. I told you, here she comes....

    one love, blak
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What's new ...you ask....???!!

    Take a good guess!!?
    Behind all the smoke & mirrors :devil:
    there's someone else standing there
    and I'm sure....

    Umm Umm - Thanks Blak!! :angel1:
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feeling all of this. Thank you.

    BE
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE ~~

    Awareness is....

    a reverse Thank YOU
    for reading all of ME!!
     
  6. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2
    Girlfriend,
    this is most proper....
    Feelin it!

    8th!
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2....

    I'm no fool...whatever has N2's name beside it, I must read!!!!

    Keep on sharing yourself with us - I love it!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  8. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for the props

    8th...you know you be
    my sistah eternally
    down with the SoulurN2!!

    Gracias mami...!
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was starting to worry about you...

    GQ, but now that I see
    your back inside
    reading ME -
    I'm comfortably
    feelin' EaSy...!

    Thanx :heart:
     
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