Black Poetry : "Trinity"

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  1. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I imagine taking your red lips is the red pill
    To find out how deep this rabbit hole goes
    To find out just how deep our love goes
    I need not think any more
    When I hear your three knocks at my heart’s door
    I have to make my decision now
    Follow you or follow the white rabbit
    So I swallow to wake up sliding in my own esophagus
    Searching for the words to speak into existence this thing called us
    Mmmm this is what love is like absent of thought and my mind’s Matrix
    It burns to finally taste, hear, feel and see the sea of our love
    But still there is a chained Morpheus inside questioning me
    How do you know that is air you are breathing?
    And how do you know this is love?
    I can only answer him,
    What I know I can’t explain, but I feel it.
    Because, like you Morpheus I’ve so longed searched for the One,
    And spoken with the Oracle.
    Only to discover there is no One.
    Except for she
    And she is my Trinity
    My first love
    My Earth, Moon and Sun
    Even though
    I am not the One.
     
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    Difficult to describe love, no matter how deeply we feel it. The feeling can be intense, even if the relationship is short lived. Your writing is so eloquent and descript.
     
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    Tha-emissary this Trinity piece was as we say in the south. Off the chain my brotha. we must collab sometimes. if you like then i'll give you my email. ain't nothing to it but to do it! have a good one love!
     
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    droppin it deep and love maze is undescribe yet felt heavy inside the heart
    i feel ya
     
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    Emissary:
    This is such a lovely and splendid piece. You expressed your
    feelings so clearly. You made me want to be your Trinity:)
    This line really touched me:
    What I know I can’t explain, but I feel it.
    I can really relate to this.


    :terrific:

    Much Luv
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    4EVERLuv:
    Sista thanks for the warm comments as always. I'm so proud of this piece because it's a part of my history. I've learned a valuable lesson from this experience that birthed this poem. That is stop worrying about the circumstances that may follow and just take the pill because there's nothing certain in life and uncertainty is life. Thanks again for the read!

    Rich: Thanks for the shout out too bro! I'll be checkin out some of your new drops as well. Peace Bro!

    Nevar: It would be my honor to mix ink with you and create some magic together. Just let me know any topic and we'll run with it for sho. It'll will be nice to do something else on my lunch break other than sleep. Take Care Love!

    Watzinaname: Last but certainly not least I have to give some props to your vivid pen strokes as well. Thanks for feeling me Watzinaname.
     
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    man how long is ya break. man i just got enough time to ahhhhh thats it! one minute brotha. ok maybe two lol. um so hurry this email wont be up for long!
     
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