Black Poetry : trinidad

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daroc, Jun 11, 2004.

  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i always wanted u
    but u were my brothers friend
    u even lived by me
    it coulda worked
    it coulda been easy
    i wasnt scarred
    or nervous
    jus anxious
    and curious
    questioning wat my bro, jo, was gonna do
    when he found out
    wantin to kno how everything would settle
    when me and u were threw
    but...
    luckily, it never happned
    my fantasies of u
    never came tru
    cuz all u wanted was revenge.....
    somin true friends wouldn't do
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was so on point and felt deep
    i know what u mean flow on
     
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    That would have been some kind of revenge. New fantasies will replace the old someday. Keep the flows coming.
     
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    Welcome aboard,
    and thanks for sharing this with us. very nice write.
     
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