Black Poetry : trim my BUSH

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  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is somin i jus wrote.. it made me laugh so i hope it makes u laugh too...

    trim my BUSH

    dowtown where my BUSH resides
    lays building, towers
    and rich pride
    for my inner city
    could rule
    if it was not a slave
    trapped
    captive
    behind my BUSH

    trim my BUSH
    get rid of my unwanted hair
    this hair only adds to the problem
    and not the answer
    hair that i dont need there

    trim my BUSH
    take away
    all that "represents" me
    "represents" us
    b/c it does not do so
    adequately

    trim my BUSH
    cut those trees down
    pull off all my dead leaves

    trim my BUSH
    for HE
    is not helping me
    expose my truths

    i can afford
    to loose a lil hair
    every here or there
    so b my guest
    and trim my BUSH

    after snipping
    u will c
    all the glow
    that the son didnt
    shine
    brighten ur day

    im tired of my BUSH
    all it does is get in da way
    its preventing me
    from rising
    to the highest high
    that mercyful walk
    on cloud nine

    mr BUSH
    mr BUSH
    u need a trim
    wit u here
    all in the world is grim
    let me help u
    and cut u quick
    i'll give u a quick fix
    then a love revolution i will mx

    hey,
    everyone
    raise ur hands
    i'm taking a count
    who's in favor of keepin
    my BUSH
    who still want is to exist
    does he have any fans?

    3, 2, 1
    zero
    oops
    last call
    times up
    here u go
    snip...snip... snip
    bye- bye i say
    as u fall to the grounbd
    bye-bye mr bushy
    and i sholl wont miss u
    really i wont
    cuz things bad like u always seem to roll right back around.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa ! bushy bush on da downlow as i smile and laugh
    you always bring a light to the community sweetly !

    do hope your considering or decide a membership
    to support the community as a PREMIUM MEMBER
    to enjoy all the features & benefits offered wow!
    look at what your missing to take advantage of !
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    got my clippers need a shave MR.Bushy ..............lol
     
  3. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    im bout to.. bout to rich.... as soon as that check come in ya fele me
     
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    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm here to snip. I have clippers handy and I'm pretty good with them. Nice poem. :toast:
     
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    all good sistah who need dat crew cut !?????
    lol
     
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    LMAO!

    Loved this joint lady..... where are my trimmers? :wink:
    LOL
    This was a true bush wacker indeed....LOL :toast:
     
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    LOL Daroc...this just came to you, huh? Sure someone didn't help ya along with those thoughts....This gave me a laugh. Thank you for that.
     
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    This is crackin me up, and obviously I agree with the sentiment behind it. Nice job, gurl.
     
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    :lol: you a mess :toast: good poem
     
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    gurl u wild....:lol:
    been looking for u to step up in chat....QQ
    www.destee.com/chat
    see ya soon...
    Peace
    Angel
     
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