Black Poetry : Trick Bag!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Jan 12, 2005.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Prayer cloth good money bought
    Who would of thought
    That a word from God,
    Cost more than I can afford
    Trick bag!
    Your savings lost

    Mortgage on the home you lost
    Much more than the neighbors' cost
    Good guys on the whitest horse
    Trick bag!
    I'm all pissed off ~ :flamet:


    Darryl Abdu Omari :pool:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2005
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow....i liked this...truth spoken...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    funny how a trick bag can get one caught up in it
    i feel ya on dis one here ......speak on bru !
     
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    Tighter than a straight jacket, baby!!!!!!!!!
     
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    Keep your eyes wide 4 them bags cuz when U get 'em open, look out.

    Nice piece.
     
  6. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace and love to all. thanks.
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah this was nice but let me drop this

    Grow in domination but need accommodations because

    I flow funny and owe money a blank butt bankrupt a pause

    In life let me borrow a dime “ok but tomorrow its time

    To payback so don’t stay whack and in debt”
     
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    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    speak on it... speak on it
     
  9. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    i hear u Cause if your only concept of god comes from a man who’s got his hands deep in your pocket
    Why the hell u think they call him a profit whenever u got money
    He going need to t come off it
    Parasite …take your money tell u lies lust for your wife
    And now u want to use his advice to tell me how to live my life
    When I all ready know its possible to be myself and still live in god
    Trying convince of other wise is ludicrous
    tight flow as always :welldone: ...hookup
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MADD, daroc, THA HOOKUPMAN, thank you all.
     
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