Black Poetry : Treasure

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PatriceCQueen, Dec 14, 2005.

  1. PatriceCQueen

    PatriceCQueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Standing on the edge of emotion
    Just beyond our existence of beings
    Laying in private spaces
    Where two souls interlace
    Finding teardrops of remembrance
    Cross the heart of vows
    Beckoning our plight
    My vision cascading in rapture’s light
    Asking to be held in dimensions
    As our spirits journey through indigo night
    Making music with star reflections
    Deep into a glaze of direction
    Finite ripples from within
    Where our love forever mend
    Healing private wounds
    Opening doors to venture new moons
    Expanding our universe
    Beyond the galaxy as we rise
    At the levels of ecstasy
    Where extreme bliss now kiss
    Demanding passions unfold
    Where our slumbering souls
    Are molding mega universes into beings
    Through the vast of our eyes we journey
    Beyond thoughts feeling and dreams
    In the helms of anticipation & satisfaction
    Bodies tremble in response to our energies
    Experiencing a passion of compromised bliss
    Insisting we end this moment in laughter
    Knowing our full bloom of endeavors
    In one night we have spanned a lifetime
    To cherish in our memories that abides
    In a millennium of our existence
    Sharing our secrecy of desires like an open invitation
    To replicate lovers into multiple dimensions
    Tenderly as we arrive everyplace bodies dwell
    This time the tears are ecstasy
    As the musical harp strike a core
    Wanting to dance until we are one again

    $$RICH$$ … Patrice C. Queen
     
  2. Omowale Jabali

    Omowale Jabali The Cosmic Journeyman PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Very nice poets!
     
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    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sister Patrice...this is very lovely.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this hit just right...Thankz omowalejabali from us both.

    big ups ibrahim i must say our sista did a super job on dis one
    enjoyed flowing with her too ...wow !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great flow both of you...beautiful.
     
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    Tight flow:hot:
     
  7. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thats what im talking about
    Thats was nice colaboration
    We need another one from yall
    I need to try this colab thang
    Much love Poets
     
  8. PatriceCQueen

    PatriceCQueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Tantrum, Soblessed and Watzinaname

    Thanks from us both as we all share in this journey

    can a poet rhyme
    dizzy dizzy rhyme
    make another sign for
    making jazz in a poem
     
  9. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is so beautiful.
    Enough said
    Nice collab.
     
  10. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow, flow on poet.
     
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